WWW: I like the colour scheme Sepia as it makes the masthead stand out being red which would attract readers. The article text blends with the background without having difficulty to read the actual text. The layout is simple but sophisticated. EBI: don't forget the conventions of a music magazine such as page numbers and maybe add a stand first to your DPS. MARK OUT OF 20: 11/20 (Level 3)
WWW: I like the colour scheme Sepia as it makes the masthead stand out being red which would attract readers. The article text blends with the background without having difficulty to read the actual text. The layout is simple but sophisticated.
ReplyDeleteEBI: don't forget the conventions of a music magazine such as page numbers and maybe add a stand first to your DPS.
MARK OUT OF 20: 11/20 (Level 3)
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www: good image, interesting headline. column boxes work.
ReplyDeleteebi: no standfirst, sizing of column text is inconsistent. enlarged quote too big!
12/20